Dark As Sin

Occasionally, I get inspired by music when I'm writing my poetry. This next poem was inspired by Billie Eilish's "bury a friend."

Today I'm thinking about the things that are deadly
I'm choking on greed, lust, sloth, and envy
Gluttony, wrath, and pride are so scary

I wanted the rhythm of the poem to be similar to the rhythm of the song. I also wanted to explore the "seven deadly sins" and create a persona based on them. You'll notice that each stanza gets more "deadly" as the poem goes on.

Today I'm thinking about how I am so greedy
Wanting your money and being so needy
Licking my wounds from being so sneaky

Today I'm thinking about how I'm so full of lust
Saying whatever to earn all your trust
The things that I think of would bring you disgust

Today I'm thinking about all of my green envy
Coveting all that you own, which is many
Jealousy leaving my blood in a frenzy

Today I'm thinking about being such a glutton
Eating and puking, push every button
Sucking my fingers, soon I'm forgotten

Today I'm thinking about being a sleepy sloth
Lying on hard pillows I love and I loathe
Doing nothing to enable personal growth

Today I'm thinking about how I'm so full of wrath
I want this to end in a giant bloodbath
Revenge is what makes me a sociopath

Today I'm thinking about  how I am so prideful
I left all my senses when I became rightful
How is it that suicide now sounds delightful

Today I'll sin in a dark messy medley
I want to be swallowed in shadows so scary
All from thinking about such things that are deadly

This is one of my darker poems and it's contrasted by "Bright as Virtue," another poem I'll discuss in the near future.

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